All Comments on 'Lusting After the Intern Pt. 01'

Complete sentences & a grammar-correcting app. might be fun to think about.

But on the "+" side, you very effectively captured the character of someone who would be intolerable to be around in real life; the kind of guy who makes fun of the disabled or the aged and is confused when he makes a racist, misogynistic joke that he thinks is "just hilarious" and nobody laughs, and his attempts to hit on the waitress fail and he goes to the bathroom to pout and gets the crap beat out of him and ends up getting a record 3 (THREE!) "urine cakes" removed from his ass at the emergency room.

Loved this story. Keep going!