All Comments on 'LustJail at Fetish&Bondage Expo'

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lockedndenied13lockedndenied13almost 4 years ago
This needs a continuation!

Loved the story, you should continue this on! Would love to hear more about their adventures!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Perfect story

I loved it. It is really good to read from female chastity too. I hope they journey will be continue.

paullankypaullankyalmost 4 years ago

Brilliant writing I loved it , I hope there may be a follow up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Story

Really enjoyed the story and the concept behind it, hope you write more of it! I know it's fantasy but I kept giggling imagining the Consumer Products Safety Commission signing off on a product that can't be removed and would kill you (eventually!) if you don't charge it. Would be a fun meeting!

wannabeusedwannabeusedover 3 years ago
Good start

I sure would like to hear about the next part.

AlonThorAlonThorover 2 years ago

Good one. Wonder what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I mean, I guess it’s not bad seeing how English isn’t your first language. I just found some of your turns of phrase really confusing. Like right at the beginning your main man says they’ve been dropping hints at a fetish con coming up, but how could they be at the con dropping hints if the con is a couple weeks away? Some weird expressions too for English speakers, like “They surely cost premium” Can’t say I’ve ever heard that before. Good descriptions though, liked that part

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Bondage erotica writer - my stories mostly include tease & denial play and chastity belts fetish (for both female and male). For updates on my stories, please check my Website (https://sites.google.com/view/jonathancuff/main-page or you can click the link in the Contact tab)....