All Comments on 'Lynn Meets Her Master Ch. 01'

... and fast! Great start, I hope to see how it develops. :)

Please, tell us more!! Great so far!!

perhaps it will be cleared up in PArt II

hey, you have not written since August last year...you turning this into a marathon? Or have you been all tied up?!

Good start, great scenes, just watch your spelling. But overall fantastic.

I would like more. But you should invest in an editor. They have a whole section on this site of volunteer editors. People willing to give up their time to read your stories to ensure they are the best they can be.

I myself volunteered to be an editor because i am sick of reading potentially mind blowing stories ruined by bad spelling and grammar. However, that aside this was a hot story and i loved it and would love more!