All Comments on 'Mackenzie Day 03 - Manic Monday'

by GabrielInkabus

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

I am totally loving this story! 5 stars again.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

These stories are definitely in the wrong category. NO incest and banging your daughters friend is not taboo. It always sucks when you spend your time anticipating what might happen (incestwise) and then nothing does. These are nothing more than boring stories about and older guy and a girl.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop7 months ago

Why are whiny ass clowns always Anon. Let the story develop the chapters are not long , let the author breathe ffs and banging your young daughters bi friend 30 mins after she ate your daughter out kinda is taboo .

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

jfc that racial stereotype.

WhipmasterWhipmaster7 months ago

Take a moment to consider the titles of your stories if they are in sequence. Near impossible to find them in any order. Not worth the effort to read your writing when they are all over the place.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Super cool when an author just lobs around weird stereotypes for literally no reason. Sure puts me in the mood.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

What’s with the racist stuff?

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Aspiring writer, creator, professional liar. A note for those who read my works. My text editor is as good as I can afford. I write as a hobby. I have a number of books in the works and I hope to become a professional writer with any luck. I thank you all for your comments. La...