All Comments on 'Maddie's New Slave'

To similar to Sophie's way, which was better than this one. I like where you end your chapter but the way you get there need some work, some build up. more from where the second girl comes into the scene until she is hypnotized. Thank you for sharing.

It would be great if you could call her a foot slave instead of just calling her a slave.

Enjoyed this a lot.