by mandywoods
Well written. It builds in intensity and lends itself to any number of further chapters with Audrey continuing to control Madison.
Good start. I always hope for the worst and most humiliating outcome for our lovely exhibitionists.
wow that was one amazing start to being an exobitionist, I sure hope there are more stories to come on the Madisisons expanding story into exobitionism
OMG! An exquisite story well written. It left me with a dripping pussy, I was so wet! Hope there is more soon. Amazing!
Very well written. Most of all it made the unbelievable believable. Well done! (Spotted just a couple of errors/typos if you want me to point them out, feel free to message me).) Looking forward to your next story.
Loved it. I hope you revisit it someday. Would love to hear how the rest of the ride goes with her completely naked and wearing cum. Then onto a wickedly humiliating senester!
Amazing story. I am in love with Madison, just like Audrey. My pussy is so wet thinking of her. Please write more. I am looking forward to seeing what she will do during the semester at college.
The thing about Dom/Sub relationships is that they're still consensual. The dom won't actually use blackmail to get the sub to obey unless it's a thing that was discussed previously.
Sexy story - loved the inner dominant that pushed Madison along! Well done.
Wow, that was a great story! I can’t wait to read more about Madison’s adventures :)
Very hot, very kinky. However, I didn't like the nonconsensual aspect. Blackmail appeals to some, but it is a definite turnoff for me.
Your stories would benefit from a second eading - minor details like Tshirt changing into a blouse and the sequencing of legs up oin the seat for example.
Also don't your real dogs ever go out for a walk?
Otherwise super stuff
That was indeed a sizzler! Great premise. I hope you write more about the two of them!
What a great story. Regarding the blackmail aspect: it would have been even better, if Audrey asked Madison while Madison was horny if it would be OK to take some pictures/videos and Madison agreed. And in the state of absolute arousal Madison might have decided on her own to ask Audrey to use these pictures/videos to push her towards her borders - making the blackmail consensual.
Another highly erotic story by this very talented authoress brilliantly touching on exhibitionism, pet play, humiliation, Dominance/submission, plus much more. This is the fourth story I have read by this authoress and now will have rated all four as 5 star stories. There is much to like here, but the pet play and the evolving Dominance-submission are especially erotic and could definitely be further developed in future installments. Hopefully we will see these installments and we will be able to watch these 3 characters complete this amazing journey back to school, and then to observe the two roommate's once vanilla relationship transform into something very different as they go though the school year. The comments I have read seem overwhelmingly positive for this story and authoress, and for the couple that mentioned a concern about NC, I think they have to remember that this is a work of fiction. This is a story, because of it's high quality, subject matter, and potential, deserves future installments. ***** ADM
Incredibly detailed, well written and very erotic story. Definitely noting this author for future reading!!
You haven't finished this story, have you? It's so good that I'm really looking forward to the sequel!!!