All Comments on 'Madison's Dog Day of Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic story.. hope to read more soon !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well written. It builds in intensity and lends itself to any number of further chapters with Audrey continuing to control Madison.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Moved pretty fast.

CityWolfCityWolfover 2 years ago

Good start. I always hope for the worst and most humiliating outcome for our lovely exhibitionists.

Hellboy70Hellboy70over 2 years ago

Great story, keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow that was one amazing start to being an exobitionist, I sure hope there are more stories to come on the Madisisons expanding story into exobitionism

BukkakeGirl25BukkakeGirl25over 2 years ago

OMG! An exquisite story well written. It left me with a dripping pussy, I was so wet! Hope there is more soon. Amazing!

BobbieSherBobbieSherover 2 years ago

Very well written. Most of all it made the unbelievable believable. Well done! (Spotted just a couple of errors/typos if you want me to point them out, feel free to message me).) Looking forward to your next story.

BobbieSherBobbieSherover 2 years ago

Oops I posted anonymously by accident.

peter_wanderer2peter_wanderer2over 2 years ago

Nice story, would be better without black mailing

Drazenpet23Drazenpet23over 2 years ago

Loved it. I hope you revisit it someday. Would love to hear how the rest of the ride goes with her completely naked and wearing cum. Then onto a wickedly humiliating senester!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing story. I am in love with Madison, just like Audrey. My pussy is so wet thinking of her. Please write more. I am looking forward to seeing what she will do during the semester at college.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The thing about Dom/Sub relationships is that they're still consensual. The dom won't actually use blackmail to get the sub to obey unless it's a thing that was discussed previously.

WickedNaughtyThoughtsWickedNaughtyThoughtsover 2 years ago

Sexy story - loved the inner dominant that pushed Madison along! Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am looking forward to reading about more of Madison's adventures.

SailingforfunSailingforfunover 2 years ago

Great Story! Well written!

BigbobncBigbobncover 2 years ago

Wow, that was a great story! I can’t wait to read more about Madison’s adventures :)

exhibdadexhibdadover 2 years ago

Amazing story, would love to read more of Madison and Audrey

lazy_readerlazy_readerover 2 years ago

Very hot, very kinky. However, I didn't like the nonconsensual aspect. Blackmail appeals to some, but it is a definite turnoff for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your stories would benefit from a second eading - minor details like Tshirt changing into a blouse and the sequencing of legs up oin the seat for example.

Also don't your real dogs ever go out for a walk?

Otherwise super stuff

Camguy4funCamguy4funover 2 years ago

That was indeed a sizzler! Great premise. I hope you write more about the two of them!

KarotteKarotteover 2 years ago

What a great story. Regarding the blackmail aspect: it would have been even better, if Audrey asked Madison while Madison was horny if it would be OK to take some pictures/videos and Madison agreed. And in the state of absolute arousal Madison might have decided on her own to ask Audrey to use these pictures/videos to push her towards her borders - making the blackmail consensual.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Enjoyed it…I like your style…keep writing!

chris61991chris61991about 2 years ago

Great story! Lots of ENF and exhibitionism! I hope there's more to come!

Sensualist1974Sensualist1974about 2 years ago

Another incredible romp!

ADauntlessManADauntlessManabout 2 years ago

Another highly erotic story by this very talented authoress brilliantly touching on exhibitionism, pet play, humiliation, Dominance/submission, plus much more. This is the fourth story I have read by this authoress and now will have rated all four as 5 star stories. There is much to like here, but the pet play and the evolving Dominance-submission are especially erotic and could definitely be further developed in future installments. Hopefully we will see these installments and we will be able to watch these 3 characters complete this amazing journey back to school, and then to observe the two roommate's once vanilla relationship transform into something very different as they go though the school year. The comments I have read seem overwhelmingly positive for this story and authoress, and for the couple that mentioned a concern about NC, I think they have to remember that this is a work of fiction. This is a story, because of it's high quality, subject matter, and potential, deserves future installments. ***** ADM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Incredibly detailed, well written and very erotic story. Definitely noting this author for future reading!!

Arszlan69Arszlan693 months ago

You haven't finished this story, have you? It's so good that I'm really looking forward to the sequel!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Pleaseeeee write the sequel, desperately waiting for it!!?

Enslaver_kinkEnslaver_kink1 day ago

Please update this, it's very well written.

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Hi. I'm Mandy. I write stories that are part real and part fiction. Mostly, they involve my submissive nature and my fantasies. Can you determine what is real or not?