All Comments on 'Magic is a Powerful Thing Ch. 08'

I dislike a story involving high school students. The fact that it will involve underaged minors borders on illegal, or at the least immoral. After all, if a charm can affect his mother then it will affect some 14 year old who walks past him in the hall way.

However, it is good to see a story involving an actual nice guy. One who is a teenage boy but also a decent person.

I look forward to more stories.

whackdoodle I understand your position and your point of view. its something I have overlooked but I promise there will be no under underage intimacy in this story. There is a subplot later involving Tina but it will be tasteful.

Thank you for your comment

I thank you for creating a good sci fi story based around magic and its use! I find the plot to your story absolutely fascinating! Keep up the good work and is there any potential for a new chapter? If there is could you perhaps give me a time frame as to when it will be dropped or is that not something that you would be able to tell me?

A new chapter has been released for review by literotica. though dont expect the next chapter soon. a heatwave and writers block along with an active family life has left me with little time. But please enjoy and thank you very much for your praise.