by KnightOfDesire
Just ridiculous, couldn't even finish it. If misspelled basic words like waist written as waste weren't bad enough, how is some one to believe a cock entering the stomach let alone bringing as big as you made it. 1 star
Oh yo! Maybe a noncon and violence warning would have been nice, I jaw dropped when the one chick started to hurt the other… :(“
Like what you like but this seriously needs a content warning from the author because non-consensual and violence (+...enslavement, i guess???) is absolutely not my thing and it arrives out of nowhere in this one.
Agreed with other comments that it needs a non con and violence warning. Not cool
This "story" is proof that one can find bullshit every where. It deserves no more than a "0"... or maybe a new heading like "Science Crap".