by philipcollin
Combines hentai themes very well. Keep working on making your scenes more erotic , gave you 5 stars for now
Very good story. The only thing I would say to work on is proofreading. Noticed a few spelling errors, but mostly just forgotten letters. I do that all the time :3 Other than that very minor complaint (honestly, it was easily overlooked), the story was brilliant. Good blend of themes, and it is so hard to find a multi-cock story; in this case, it was even futa! Keep up the great work <3