All Comments on 'Mai and I'

by McCrow

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FlpantherFlpantherover 8 years ago
Well Done

Beautifully written!! More...please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was fuckin hot

I'd love to see more

Ladd_RussoLadd_Russoover 8 years ago

This is right up my alley. Absolutely loved it. The whole "straddle the line between aggressive dom and tender romantic" part is right there what I'm looking for :)

Really really hope you continue with another chapter. This is easily your best story yet. I did like "Fucking Insatiable", but the whole fantasy setting there toned it down for me a bit. I gave that a 4/5, this one an easy 5/5 and favorited.

The one small thing I would've changed about this story would've been the end - "When she had enough energy (and impatience) back, she put me on my stomach and pounded me until I screamed for her and begged for another load in me", why not "she put me on my hands and knees..."? Doggy is too hot of a position IMHO too overlook completely, and besides that he was already on his stomach earlier IIRC. Small detail, yes, but thought I should give some feedback/personal opinion to potentially influence chapter 2 :)

lililthlililthover 8 years ago
Love it.

Would like to see more like this :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW

That is an amazing piece of work...I play a character in Chatropolis named Mai Phantasy who is a transsexual, and I do have a friend named Callum...This naturally blew Me away

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Coclover

I wish I had a amazon she male fucking my sissy ass. Having a goodlooking women who happens to have a beautiful cock to it's perfect now I have to find someone to fuck my gay ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
WoW

My dream woman,everything I've always wanted. My dreams will come true one day..

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Perfect

This story is amazing gentle domination romance and love all together. All I want now is to be Callum. Right up my street.

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