by KnightRadiant
Another well thought out and well written chapter. I was so excited to see a new chapter and you didn’t let me down as this one was full of action, drama, excitement, and mystery. I will not fault you for taking the amount of time to write chapter two because the importance of family, work, and life in general always should take precedence and with the hell that this last year has caused, I was actually somewhat surprised that you managed a return at the point. I want to thank you for another five star chapter.
An excellent story. Well thought out. I appreciate you picking this back up after so long. Believable (or suspension of disbelief-able) world building is not easy. You have succeeded. I just hope it won't take quite so long for the next chapter.