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Click hereMother appeared. She seemed a bit surprised when she saw me. I kept my back straight and looked into her eyes. I could not read her expression, but I had a feeling she could not read mine either. She was a very narrow sort of person, a lot like me, actually.
"Analia."
"Mother."
She observed me with her discerning eyes, that eternal frown. I stared back.
Mother stepped aside and let me enter.
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END OF SEMESTER ONE
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Well, that is the 'end.' I have plans for a sequel, where I would go into the other semesters and explore the reign of Dr. Stab, but that would be after I write other stories first. I need to figure out what other stuff to make fun of (the main purpose of this series, after all, was to make fun of college).
As always, I appreciate feedback. Please let me know which parts of the story you liked most, or hated most, which parts were most erotic, or least erotic, and generally how I can make my stories better!
- COMMENTS
pfellabout 1 month agoWow, that was a fun and exciting read! Starting with a silly premise and a fun story, which developed into something deeper. I would be very interested in a sequel, even though it turned a bit dark in the end.
Anonymous6 months agoFantastic story …. Please take Your time and surprise us with another book once You are ready. Liked the pairing of erotic thrill, fun & games, good vs evil, and developments + nuances in the characters … light, playful entertainment, dark themes and deep timeless philosophy.
As writing about Andrea’s and Leah has impressed beyond expectations …. The other characters are bit ‚sketchy‘ However it is not a major issue … as it is not a full novel with endless chapters like 19th century classics. A bit more Color or depth on the 4 leads, Leah and Andrea Rue and Stacy, would be nice, but how to add and not destroy the overall good rhythm? It works well as it is, as the ‚economic‘ narrative with many well spaced scenes is well balanced and fast paced, thus adding to my reading fun.
Still, there is no real follow up to the recruiting party walkout. While we learn about Andrea’s economic situation and opinion, Stacy and Rue forgiving their friends … we are missing any reactions from fellow students or Kaycee… or Professors, … or the college paper … really no pushback, from the „Greek“. crowd?
Anonymous11 months agoNo idea how that one reader could have gotten the idea that simply their dislike would mean for you to stop writing, but PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. Every day I get onto your page hoping for a new chapter greeted with disappointment. Ofcourse real life issues always exist in which case, erotica doesent range very high in priorities, but if you manage the time. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.
Anonymousover 1 year agoPlease don’t get discouraged from the few negative comments, this story is excellent, reminds me a lot of my college years. Look at the ratings! I like the love developing between Leah and Andrea, the characters Stacy and Rue, and Mori and Ho. It would be interesting to find out how things would be like with Dr Stab in charge
