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All Comments on 'Making a Choice'

by Alexand Morgan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved It!

Nice Work

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Now that you have developed the character

you should use him again. What happens when he falls in love?

The editing could be tighted up a little and the story fleshed out, but it is a nice story line that was enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love it 2!

I agree that you should build upon the main character in a series of stories to show how he related to women (of all types). Excellent story!

SleeplessinMD

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