All Comments on 'Making of a Porn Queen Ch. 01'

Well written nice story can't wait for the next chapter

May I suggest making Stephanie just a little more reluctant?

Object to Miss Tracy's transforming him, which she then overcomes?

Otherwise great story

I loved the whole series (of five chapters).

I can't wait for the next one ... when Mark gets home?

Debbie

The earlier comment about making Stephanie a little more reluctant was very apt but I disagree. Most of us would have read a feminization story before and know what is what. The story does the task of arousing the reader superlatively. Perfect amount of detail, perfect narrative voice. Steph is not the smartest of dudes and this is brought out wonderfully. And a word about the pacing. To be able to maintain interest without getting into the pump, spurt, jerk mode is hard, but you did it. I am only surprised that I have not read other stories by you. That will soon be corrected.

I love this story, It is hot and sexy, and I had a great time reading this Series.

Scribbler this series is sexy hot, I jerked off and came a couple of times just reading this story keep it up.

his got me

so hot, I had to quit reading for a few hours, just to calm down. Thank you.

I really loved the story. It had a big heart and felt both very emotional and true. I couldn't stop reading and even after I was spent I found myself reading 'just a few more pages' to know what was happening.

One of the greats here at Literotica I think. the T-girl genre might not be for everyone but its really worth your time.

I really love your work, and have read it all with pleasure. But as I re-read this wonderful tale I am struck once again by how unrealistic your height/weight ratios are. A six foot tall woman who.weighed less than a hundred pounds would literally be a walking skeleton. My advice would be to avoid weight all together when describing your characters. Curvy, slender, busty, lanky etc all paint a better picture than a scale number. Just my opinion.

Hot story, but this really doesn't explain at all why the main character suddenly jumps from male to female presentation gender or suddenly becomes bisexual.

There are a couple of possibilities... either this person was gender dysphoric and bisexual all along (but was actively trying to suppress these traits - or even overcompensate for fear of being perceived as 'gay' or as less of a man) or this person does not and never did freely identify as bisexual/female (in which case this is merely being imposed on the character as a means of domination or degradation, a "forced feminisation" with some initial reluctance or pushback ending in defeat).

Each of these possibilities would require a very different literary treatment from what's here. I realise the author of this piece has stopped posting in 2007 or so, which is unfortunate as this otherwise-entertaining story really doesn't explain why this supposedly-rebellious character suddenly caves and wants to be a bisexual female at the slightest suggestion from his/her employer. The doctors usually treat any permanent physiological modification to the body type of another gender as a last resort for patients psychologically incapable of living any other way, it's not "I'm bored, I think I'll get a sex change today".

Tracy is my comfort character. I love her

Ahh what a lovely wet dream of being completely sissified by a rich cougar! Delicious Darling! Please let me know if Ms Tracy is looking for new clients!