All Comments on 'Maki's Tentacular Tale'

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queenoftheworld34queenoftheworld34over 3 years ago

Odd ending bit i liked it.

hitmebabyhitmebabyabout 3 years ago

Holy shit that ending was hilarious

vanhenry1971vanhenry1971over 2 years ago

I agree with hitmebaby, Hilarious ending - didn't see it cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Could have done with more context on Greg and the advertisement. Maybe some gentle imagery in the sex scenes? Otherwise it is pretty good.

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