by Samuelx
The story isn't bad but I nearly didn't get that far because of the prejudice in the first three paragraphs. I know some Africans do live in 'mud huts' (my church is connected to a village in Uganda which is like this - and some have visited it) but am also aware of many of the cities. Your rant about me and my people is, I feel, unjustified, and hurtful.
A confirmation that you're the worst author on Lit. Although Justin is giving you a run for your money.
I applaud your effort in writing this story and always enjoy the fruits
of your sexual imagination, Samuel X.
However, just to let you know that Abuja is the current capital of
Nigeria, and not Lagos. Abuja replaced Lagos as Nigeria's capital some
time ago.
Apart from that, keep up the good work, and ignore the haters.
Kindred Spirit.