by SpankDoc5
Truly amazing! You took an already excellent story and made it even better. If the original Author raises no objections, I'd LOVE to read your spin on all of her original stories.
Enjoyed the storytelling and the topic - scene. Thank you.
Good writing start. Hope for more, your imagination - psyche and/or more set-up from dominantwomenrule. And credit to you for giving credit where credit is due, as well as the effort in reaching out.
What I'd also enjoy reading is what the gals and guys are emotionally feeling, particularly the first-person storyteller. Analytically you're strong and also good in not being dogmatic.
Again, thank you. All your efforts are appreciated.