All Comments on 'Malvika's Tryst With Destiny Pt. 01'

by enigmatic_ecstasy

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dreamy_shreyadreamy_shreyaover 1 year ago

This was super hot. Every detail, every emotion and the dilemma of an Indian woman is beautifully captured.

Thank you for sharing. You have gained a follower.

bdrew86bdrew86over 1 year ago

Well Done. We have a new rising star in Indian Erotica right here.

A good story. I hope to read more of this soon.

Bdrew.

PelicanspenPelicanspenover 1 year ago

That was an amazing read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fabulous! We were all worked up a few times!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice one waiting for more updates.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story to start.... awaiting more from you...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A great writer rising in the world of Indian Erotica what a Story loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now that's what u call a story.. With ebbs and flow.. Which at least also look a bit real.. And not just fantasy... Amazing set up of Sexual harassment office case being going on in protagonist's mind!

shrutisharma420shrutisharma420over 1 year ago

A very well written erotica after a long time....new star after Aurelius, Shiprat, Bdrew

Keep writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well written. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hi we are all waiting for next episode, hope this story will have more sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Next part ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Second episode please make her little bit reluctant

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Superb!! Please post 2nd episode asap. Make her reluctant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A good story line that mixes elements of desire, taboo, reluctance and subtle domination. Loved the flow of the story.

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