All Comments on 'Man of Power Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good series

I'm loving this series, though I sometimes wish there was more action with more ladies.

Anyways, I have a request. If this Moolchandani guy is gonna have a wife who bangs Vikas, can she be played by Anushka Shetty or Madhuri Dixit? I love imagining them as hotwives.

Lastly, do you see any potential in an "impregnation" storyline within this series? As in, Shriya's husband can't knock her up so she happily turns to Vikas instead. Her husband doesn't like this but he has no other option but to give consent to this. It's totally fine if these type of stories don't suit your tastes, just saying.

nextcenturyromeonextcenturyromeoalmost 4 years agoAuthor
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Thank you, I am glad you are liking the story. I don't want to make it a series of sex scenes. I want to make it a real story which has a lot of sex in it. Which is why I want to continue the action at the current rate. There will be more action at some points, depending on the situation.

I have noted your request for Anushka Shetty. It can be done, but it will be quite a while before she appears. The situation will need to arise for her to appear, and it won't be for some time as there's a lot of story to be told before Vikas meets Moolchandani in Bombay. .

Madhuri is already assigned a role in this series and yes, she will be a hot wife but she will also appear after a long time.

I hope you keep enjoying the story.

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 4 years ago
You keep writing better

Being a good writer is a craft. Each chapter should be part of your growth as a writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Decent except

I will not make a big deal out of things I didn't quite understand, as I read a lot of Chapters from longer sets based on Celebrity names in the tags (& sometimes only after Googling them or something to help me picture it).

However, there was a section on Page 1 that was too much "non-English" to comprehend the meaning.

nextcenturyromeonextcenturyromeoalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Non-English

Hi Anonymous,

Thank you for taking the time to comment. Your complaint is fair, there is quite a few words of Hindi in some places. You have already given the source of the problem though. When I first use a Hindi word I translate it there in brackets. I don't do it every time I use it after that. If you are only reading parts here and there then you may miss those translations.

I am afraid this trend will continue as I don't want to clutter up each story with lots of translations.

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