All Comments on 'Manasvi: First Encounter'

Poorly . I realize it must have taken A lot to translate it n whatever province you're from , but much too difficult to complete he translation . Sorry but vthanx for the effort .

Excellent first time story. I was enthralled and captivated. English my native tongue but not the author's. Still I could ride with the feelings and image and intent. Yumm. Keep writing. Thank you.