All Comments on 'Mandy's Special Examination'

by exquisitelifetime

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Why is it in Loving Wives?

That is the first question. There is no mention of her being married and no mention of her husband.

The story itself is poorly written and virtually defies explanation.

Extremely poor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Author (who posts garbage under different names) needs a special exam.

To verify that a human CAN live with nothing between the ears.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
Has tone deliberate

How often do M.D.s offices get hijacked & ransacked? Very rarely, for several good reasons. Ruby (AKA Rudy) was going to keep an eye out for BikerBoy since she didn't trust him! Did 'we' forget that? Most exam rooms are not that soundproof.

The premise sucks swamp water ... A person who has a medical problem which calls for a rectal exam will NOT be thinking 'naughty thoughts' about the MD! He or she has a serious problem and it's probably painful ... NOT erotic!

If perchance the premise could be made somewhat plausible, and the execution improved significantly, it would STILL be a max3 tale.

exquisitelifetimeexquisitelifetimealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Ignorance and bliss

Boys n girls ... not everyone lives in the mighty USA some of us live in other English speaking countries where doctors work in room where the building codes require them to be sound proof. You are such a fickle lot - Mandy was married but it was to a frog who was really her Prince. But perhaps that was after she had her last LSD trip. Get over it children or you'll get a big spanking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Crass, bad grammar & wrong words used.

I haven’t seen quite used instead of quiet for months. Get you a editor.

Bill S.

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