by bilbobuggins
I love your stories, but this one in particular was nearly spoiled by innumerable typos. I realize that Literotica writers do it for free, but it’s a shame to spoil such good writing by unnecessary errors. I’m happy to work for free, too, and would be willing to be your proofreader. I performed the same service for Harp Strathe and he professed himself to be happy with my efforts. I also worked with J W McKenna some years ago. Please let me know if I can help.