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All Comments on 'Marianne: Seduction Of An Older Woman'

by VintageWine2

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A super story

VintageWine2VintageWine2over 5 years agoAuthor
previous comment.

This story is my highest rated, at over 4.6. It's had over 160,000 views over the decade. So your patronising critique certainly tells us more about you than it does about me and my story, Mr anonymous :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Poorly Composed

I really tried but could not get past several paragraphs. Your writing style is awkward, is stumbling making it difficult to follow. Too elementary - fifth grade level.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mmmmmm!

Hav'nt `I been there... lovely story, well done and so you should be!!!

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Hi. Older Australian male writer, married. I love erotic chats with younger women, esp. those leading to mutually satisfying outcomes. I am flexible. Love cyber, rp, fantasies, porn-sharing, and just chatting. My favourite young chat partner is creative, imaginative and quick ...