All Comments on 'Marian's Sweet Dilemma'

You have a knack for writing, but your grammar & syntax are off-putting.

garbage

Learn to break up your sentences into several, each to reflect a thought.

Here's an example of your writing:

"Well he fucked her and he fucked her good, she went from a apprehensive married women, to a street whore pro in a matter of a couple of hours, they fucked wildly in every position they knew Marian loved being on top best experiencing orgasm after orgasm, sliding up off him and finishing it off with her eager mouth once again!"

You should write it as:

"Well, he fucked her and he fucked her good. She went from an apprehensive married woman to a street whore pro in a matter of a couple of hours. They fucked wildly in every position they knew. Marian loved being on top best experiencing orgasm after orgasm, sliding up off him and finishing it off with her eager mouth once again!"

Even as corrected, the construction still is loosey goosey!

good read very believable keep up the good work

i dream of guys like melvin so wonderful when u find one like marion did

so true she has been fucked by nigger cock i can tell , i know the feeeling

and like her what to feel it over and over

sure could be a true story, be hard to resist Melvin for sure

Use him for pleasure till I wore him out lol

Tell us more about this couple so hot