All Comments on 'Marion's Story Ch. 12'

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coyote62coyote62over 3 years ago

I was a little confused...but its a great story. Ive enjoyed everything. Cant wait for more!!

darthnader19darthnader19over 3 years ago
5 stars

Glad to see this amazing story continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great carry on.

This bit fits well with the first nine chapters, some forgotten,bits, such as Bevs daughters questions about her uncle becoming an aunt. A great story, with Mi still wrestling with he’s self view of being a man in a dress. I foresee this question and children for Molls and Mi. More soon please. Well done, Jim t.......

njlaurennjlaurenover 3 years ago
Glad you kept going

This is a great story,love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dead name

Can you please stop your characters from constantly dead naming your protagonist and maybe misgendering your main character... Its really a good story but evrytime it happen it make me cringe. Oh and Alain Juppé that the story continue forward without any nonconsensual forced sex on male despote opposition from the main character. Its just Auch a réduisant trope in trans erotic story. I am critical but i still like to read Mi's story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great to see you continued this series. Thought ch 9 was a good ending, but so happy to see it's continued.

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