All Comments on 'Mark and Chloe - Not Just Friends'

Keep trying. Extremely rough, uneven writing but you tried so that's a plus. And it's not a cuck story....yet. you've started Mark out as a bit of a submissive and Chloe as a bit of a easy slut.

Well written and engaging. I’d love to see more. Enjoyed the Aussie phrasing.

I suggest using the free editing option to clean up some of the spelling and homonym mistakes for your next submission.

Great debut, almost perfect. More please