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by WhoopsieThatsNSFW

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JustanotherdirtyoldmanJustanotherdirtyoldmanabout 3 years ago

Nicely done. I like your writing. I like your descriptions. I would've liked the story to be stretched and to have gone a bit deeper. That's OK though. That's what imagination is for.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Chapter 1? Is there more?

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