by may_200
Ok, that was a plot twist I didn't see coming. Now I'm fully wondering whether Mark would have issues. Like, he goes into dominating Mia with full confidence, but then finds she's so cute and sexy he has trouble doing so?
Maybe then, Ally could show him what makes Mia tick, as a sub~
Wow. That was a very different twist. I loved it. I can't wait to find out how it goes from here on out. :D
This is a great part 1, love it, especially the twist at the end! I'd love a part 2! But please make Mia a willing sub that loves being dominated and who originally wanted to be feminized and put in chastity by Ally. There are so many stories where the sub was forced into it all by a downright abusive dom, I'd love to see a different take here.