All Comments on 'Married to Porn Pt. 03'

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KahunabobKahunabob4 months ago

Alright. The whole Porn Dynasty / Porn Dallas premise is still interesting. I think you managed to wrap up most of the story lines decently. The only thing I can't place is the time jumps in the epilogues and how Tracee / Cassandra got involved in a poly pod with Dionne and Devonte. Also kind of curious what happened to Cal's billionaire fortune. Aside from that, fun story. Solid 4/5 imho. Thanks for sharing!

Adonisblack1Adonisblack14 months agoAuthor

Kahunabob, great catch on the missing fortune. I meant to have Alley boy control it as well as oversee the company but it slipped my mind. If I didn’t say it in the epilogue I meant to make it known that there was an 11 month gap from the start to the end of the story. Thank you so much for your insight and all definitely do better in the future!

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