All Comments on 'Martha, Dylan and Me Ch. 02'

by helenjensen2

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SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkover 15 years ago
You kee pme hanging On

It was refreshing to read a 'story' and not just a succession of fucks. sucks a and licks. I would hope that this author continues this story as we are left with two vigins, at least, and one very hard cock waiting for release (mine).

feliciacosminafeliciacosminaover 15 years ago
keep writting!

It's amazing you just submitted 2 stories and your stories are so well written. The way his mother dominates them, teaching what lust means, is very arousing.

I liked very much the long denial of real intercourse for the kids, mixed with a lot of teasing and oral sex.

I looks like everybody there willingly submits to Martha, who has the right to allow or not their behaviour.

Personally, I wouldn't like to see the story turning into normal BDSM, (chains, whips, latex...). This woman doesn't need these tools to make them obey her. She's got sexual power, which is enough. I wouldn't like an "everybody screws everybody" continuation. At least not without Martha's orders.

I hope the next chapters will be at least as good as these two! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good Work

Thanks for a nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent and Unusual StoryLine

Excellent and Unusual StoryLine

superb storyLine - definitely five star. Description of coupling was just correct.

Please let yu Have chapters 3 and 4. The possibilities are endless.

Ranji

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Did the woman just justify child abuse? She threatened her son saying that she could rape her daughter but didn't as this was her mercy. She is an ultimate tease and the son needs to find some real love not this fake one. She is hurting her child emotionally and physically and she doesn't care. This is not love, this is not bdsm, this is just abuse. Thank God you never wrote another story

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