All Comments on 'Mary Jane's Fall from Grace'

A great start, can't wait to see where you take this. Maybe even a memory gets jogged loose about Uncle Ben and MJ.

Great Story. Exciting and arousing....the thought of MJ being used by hideous old men makes my dick rise

This was a really good opening id love to read her further corruption

Always happy to see more pot-bellied old men getting close and comfortable with beautiful women!

Fantastic story! A great opener to be sure, would love to see at least another entry. Maybe even throw in some other of spidey's roster of villains for some three way fun?

So... someone's probably been reading Deviant Roomba's Vows Unspun on Archive Of Our Own...

can you please finish your ongoing stories?

Oh you really need to continue this story. It has so much potential!!!

Have you thought about tackling any other franchises?

oh man I need more of this! she has to go to him.

How about another one with Mary Jane and Nick Katzenberg? Chronicles of Spider-Man on this page touched on it but changed to Nick's nephew, somewhat of sequel on CHOYA but too much Dom/Submissive sadism I don't like.

Yes, please continue!

Would you trust a gangster boarder black or white to raise himself, a woman and a child ? BS!!!

I’d read on if you’d write on. Good detail, good writing. It kept its promise that being my interest. Maybe let Mary Jane become overwhelmed by a crew of crooks and villains, ‘oh no not my clothes,’ she pleads playing the victim as they gather around her encroaching on her menacingly all the while her pussy is a faucet. From her subconscious mind her deep rooted fantasies rise to the fore occasionally getting the better of her and the ravaging they put her through is just the thing she needs and after they’ve finished with her body she reveals her caper turning the tables throwing them all in the slammer. Good guys 1 bad guys 0, wait not that’s right, let me see here, good guys 1 bad guys 6, ah wait, folks it seems both sides walked away with a victory, of sorts. Tune into next weeks adventures where we follow our heroine fighting of a band of horny three foot big cock goblins, an amazonion plant secreting pheromones intent on inserminating and spreading its seed and lets not forget the dirty old man who turns invisible specialising in seedy behaviour.

Nothing new here. I story where you can close your eyes and write yourself.

This was a fantastic start really hope you continue this and MJ satisfys her needs