All Comments on 'Mary Returns Home'

They are going in the right direction

Editor needed? We all do. That can be provided, but your creativity, character interaction, and story progression is sound and very engaging. I enjoy your work. Please keep at it. Wife sharing can be an experience. But do yourself a favor. Write a 'Sheldon Cooper' relationship agreement/postnatal. Head true infidelity off at the pass.

All the best,

Dave

This is soooo wonderful. The only thing that would make it hotter is to add a scat component to complement the incestuous cuckoldry that we all agree is a super fantastic concept. The slur wife should really enjoy being smeared with her father's feces and should delight in the opportunity to savor the flavor, aroma and texture of his paternal scat. Keep the fun times coming!

Very exciting story. 5 stars. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Very HOT!! 5 Stars.

I liked this story…When my wife finally acted…when she actually had sex with another man, it just totally intensified my need to just kneel before her cunt and worship her… then when she guided my throbbing cock in, and I felt his semen, I completely lost it and almost instantly just came so so hard…then she stared at me and almost sneered, but then just started to giggle, then openly laughing that I could be so much smaller than her lover..After pulling out, I just knelt again. I’m proud that I feel this way.. it’s beyond hot….Hope you keep writing..

JT