by moveablefeast66
This was kind of a weird and bloodless rush to wrap everything up. No actual conversation with the wife was an especially odd choice.
4/5 overall
5/5 for most chapters but several elements soured the series to 4/5. Susan/Rey betrayal and happily ever after left me disappointed. MC killed his marriage with sex with Bella. He felt like shit and following actions were blackmail/ Susan initiated, when he knew his marriage was already toast. On the other hand Susan let other man impregnate her attempting a weird 'asexual' 'artificial insemination' charade. It was too nasty to just let it slip in a light humorous story. I would like it more if they got 1st kid from harvested MC sperm or get her pregnant soon after, it would feel more in line with overall storyline