All Comments on 'Mary's Movie Night Ch. 08: The Thing'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This was kind of a weird and bloodless rush to wrap everything up. No actual conversation with the wife was an especially odd choice.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Absolutely amazing. Loved it!

pjpbpjpbabout 2 months ago

4/5 overall

5/5 for most chapters but several elements soured the series to 4/5. Susan/Rey betrayal and happily ever after left me disappointed. MC killed his marriage with sex with Bella. He felt like shit and following actions were blackmail/ Susan initiated, when he knew his marriage was already toast. On the other hand Susan let other man impregnate her attempting a weird 'asexual' 'artificial insemination' charade. It was too nasty to just let it slip in a light humorous story. I would like it more if they got 1st kid from harvested MC sperm or get her pregnant soon after, it would feel more in line with overall storyline

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