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by hannsg

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WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood4 months ago

Sad but realistic ending. Well written.

Diego56790Diego567904 months ago

The writing was OK but tge story ended just when it started get somewhere...

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All through school I hated English class and writing stories was painful. Now I am writing stories for pleasure and wished I would have paid attention in class.