All Comments on 'Massage Therapy Ch. 01'

Loved it. Hope you start on the next part soon. 5 stars.

WOW 5 stars love the seduction, love this story.

More, more and more please plus other women. PS I am male and felt the massage, you detailed it perfectly.

Thanks for writing.

EXCELLENT CHAPTER

Looking forward to Ashlyn & Goro next massage therapy session.

Hubby done lost this round

Continue on

Cheers!

Extremely well written story and five stars from me.

Very good, and well written! Can't wait for next part!

Like the three comments before mine, I too loved this story, and look forward to the next installment. One thing I would like to suggest though is that you find a good editor/proofreader. Reading "messaged" when you meant massaged, or "How are you linking America so far?" when you meant "liking" distracts your readers from your erotic tale. There are more examples I could cite, but I think you can see that a proofreading would help. Thanks for your work.

Awesome story. It would be great if there's a gap of about six weeks where her mind keeps on losing focus when she's is on her way out of the gym whether or not to get the massage. In this time she has sex with her husband but it is not satisfying she has a Hunger a craving that's she cannot control. This makes her workout harder at the gym , pushing her body to max and causing pain .the husband tries to massage her but it is no good. Then one day the husband find the telephone number he questions her about it she explains it is just a Japanese old guy that does massaging she does not want to go he's too old probably doesn't really know what he is doing. After a few more weeks the husband becomes annoyed with her because he cannot sleep she's always tossing and turn ing her body in pain so he books a massage after the gym with the Japanese guy and informs her it is prepaid so she has to go. She will be terrified and excited at the same time not realizing she's putty in his hands . That day before going to the gym see puts on her sexiest underway not even realizing it makes her body look absolutely gorgeous. See obviously pretends to resist the Japanese guy she is soaking wet between the legs just going down to his place to meet him. Maybe it is not even a safety for her she never booked it was her husband in fact she's at her highest peak she doesn't really want anything to happen just a massage is all she keeps on saying to herself. Lol

Damn man! This story hits so hard, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope Goro will knock up Ashlyn! Keep up the good work man!

Working on a more polished version of this chapter. After giving it another read through I noticed that I missed some errors.

Supreme writing skills! 5 stars

AMAZING!!!! ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ ON LITEROTICA!!! EXCELLENT WORK!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2!!!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE WRITING MORE SUCH STORIES!!!!

Looking forward to Ch-02

Very well written. Painted a good picture of the Japanese man. The sex was almost rape. Hot!

Can't wait for more of this story, great first chapter!

You can find a Preview of chapter 2 in the discord link in my bio. The channel it's in is under Joko's Corner!

Great job Jocko

Nikki Sexx - Japanes Massage

How many stories in Lit has this scene inspired?

Some very good ones, like this one that I give 4 stars, for adding some slight changes.

great Story! one thing: I have not been able to see the second chapter on Discord... the link is correct?

Authors note: You are reading the edited version of this chapter.

Broke at "half-time" to mix a martini that surely set me up for the second half of the story. Well written, loved it.

thanks.

Great story. Reluctance then submission by a well meaning married woman is so intense erotic. Especially when it’s to a degenerate pervy man so much below the woman.