All Comments on 'Master has a Pet'

I loved this story ..... she has written others that ive read before ...... they have given me an instight to her inter most thoughts ..... knowing her and how she feels about her life style she only wants to please the one she loves .....

and one of which you should be proud. Take care with repetitious words and substitute 'He' or 'Him' for 'Master' a bit more. I know in real life one uses it a lot when in 'the zone' but as a writing exercise... well you know what I mean. A really good first effort in the genre and I encourage you to write more.

SN

She was disobedient. Her master told her to go outside and when he tugged on the leash gently she still refused. She was told her limits would be pushed and she agreed to it. When it came time to follow through she disobeyed. She only followed orders when her master verbally to her to move. A good hard punishment would do her some good. She has a very kind master but doesn't seem to care. Bad slut.