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Click here"Yes sir," she said, rising from her seat and moving to follow.
"Good girl," he said, wondering where that came from.
"I think I like it when you call me that, sir," Astra whispered, leaning in closer.
"Is that right?"
"Mmm. Yes I do. I'm sure it would do nothing for me coming from these little local boys, " she said, gesturing over her shoulder at the bar, "But you, gods look at you, just standing before you is making me feel small and insignificant. Please, please call me a good girl anytime you'd like. Sir."
That was possibly the hottest thing Jorgen had ever heard.
"Come show me what a good girl you are."
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I have many chapters written but in a write/edit spiral. I need feedback.
- COMMENTS
texguy73about 2 months agoLoking it so far, there are so many possibilities....definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Looselyhumanabout 2 months agoAuthorThanks anon for feedback on backstory. Good call.
I have 4 chapters pending. I submitted the first 3 at the same time, but lit admins are taking their time.. I didn't mean to keep everyone hanging on the Astra scene. Hopefully it pops up soon.
Anonymousabout 2 months agook, good start. no missed edits or clumsy vocab. um, intelligent barbarian? make the backstory cover it. so..keep going!
Looselyhumanabout 2 months agoAuthorAll, I forgot to mention there is a detailed world map on my patreon. Link in profile. Free only. I also submitted it to Lit as art, but it's still pending. I'll mention this in future chapters
