by OtterlyMindblowing
A Master PC story which doesn't have the MC as a demigod in the first three paragraphs is unusual, but definitely welcome. Small typo:"be in rage of it." Replace rage with range.
Unless you wish to keep pain in the story as a plot device, could Chris turn off pain receptors in the body for the duration of any change he wants to immediately implement?
To answer questions:
1) the pain is a plot device, meant to provide some tension and comedy. He figures it out… in the epilogue.
2) I have finished writing this one (and did before I started posting it here, since the entire thing was a dare that got out of hand). Chapter four is the last one of this story.
3) Due to overwhelming Patron demand, I’m already working on a sequel to this story. That one SHOULD be going up during the month of May. My WIP patrons can already see the intro. Trying to address a lot of the random things I left on the ground this time around.
👍 👍 My worries from last chapter have been assuaged a great deal. I have a little concern that this still devolve into a master/slave abuse scene, but it appears that OM is carefully avoiding that possibility. Good on you!