All Comments on 'Master Rob's Prey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

yum...I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
fab!

Genuinely perfect ;) thanks and looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
****

I agree straight to the point and very yum. If you give us a plot too , it will be divine.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 11 years ago
Great

there are a few errors but overall a great story. We need a second chapter to find out what Robs endgame is. Is she there to be his sex slave, trained and sold, bred or is she in a whorehouse? So many different ways you can go from here I hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
enjoyed reading the story

very good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

This is really good, and I like the dominance- you really know what you're talking about!

I'd love to see more. Finish this please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
It's Obvious

you've never had ANYTHING in your ass, or you would have written this scene very differently. The initial pain is unbelievably excruciating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

good job loving this story

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