All Comments on 'Master Rob's Prey'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

good job loving this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
It's Obvious

you've never had ANYTHING in your ass, or you would have written this scene very differently. The initial pain is unbelievably excruciating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

This is really good, and I like the dominance- you really know what you're talking about!

I'd love to see more. Finish this please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
enjoyed reading the story

very good story

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 11 years ago
Great

there are a few errors but overall a great story. We need a second chapter to find out what Robs endgame is. Is she there to be his sex slave, trained and sold, bred or is she in a whorehouse? So many different ways you can go from here I hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
****

I agree straight to the point and very yum. If you give us a plot too , it will be divine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
fab!

Genuinely perfect ;) thanks and looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

yum...I can't wait for the next chapter.

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