by SarahLou81
Good, SarahLou-- Perfect length (as Little Slut might say)-- you get right to the point. Vivid images, and you don't deny the girl her pleasure-- she cums as many times as the men who are fucking her. Good to read a nice description of a female orgasm.
in too few minutes. Also too little proofreading. And too much formula, not enough character.