by Bonez36
I feel as though pet is a little bit too bold. I do like her character quite a bit however I just feel as though she takes too many liberties that are above her station. But I would love love love to see her get punished for being too bold and presumptuous. She just seems to forget that she’s a pet/slave and I definitely think that this needs to be rectified. Other than that though I thoroughly enjoy the story. I just think like I said that she asks for a little too much and that her master gives it her way too often.
Sweetnessfreak, Mia is his wife. If that is not important then why should the author even bother making it so? If a wife isn't more important than a growing menagerie of other females, the author ought to chuck the marriage. Even a harem of hundreds places the number one wife in an honored position.
There are some errors with spelling, grammar and punctuation but other than that, I am thoroughly enjoying the story. As for the other comment about Mia getting lost in the story, the story is called MASTER'S Pet, not Mia's Pet. Mia is a secondary character. Looking forward to reading more.
How many slaves can one master serve, especially having a wife who most would feel comes before any slave for his time and efforts? Mia is becoming lost within the story. I deeply appreciate the positive nature of the interactions; however, I feel no meaningful emotional connections between any of the characters.