by OrbitalCruiser
Thank you for the sexy nylon story! Love that stuff : ). Would be fun if they just couldn't get enough of licking that pantyhosed cock ... together ...
“Do you remember Claire?” Perfect connection; after all, how could you forget Claire. Captures attention; peaks curiosity, yet nothing more developed, which is a lost opportunity. This piece is a wild ride with bizarre closing moment. Get the succubus angle, but frenzied sex so drawn out/all but overdone jeopardizing the storyline/main point. Could have tightened/shortened without loss. That said, want to see where you take this story and characters — poor Jake.
Love, this. Can't wait for the next chapter. This could go on for many chapters, nice writing