All Comments on 'Matt The Lumberjack'

Hate the little Brother, fucking perv.

Is the lumberjack thing going to come into the story later?

Great start, hope you make it a long one (story that is).

One thing, when you mention his snake as a cobra, Do you mean a spitting Cobra? :)

Congrats

And I read your Bio, so here's a recipe for you

Carrot Cake:

Ingredients:

1 ¼ cups vegetable oil

4 large eggs

1 ½ tsp baking soda

3 cup sifted flour

1 cup roughly chopped nuts

2 cups castor sugar

2 tsp baking powder

2 cups grated carrots

2 cups mashed bananas

Method:

Mix all ingredients together, blend well

Pour into two well greased loaf pans.

Bake in preheated (180°C/ 350°F) moderate oven until centre springs back.

This cake freezes well.

Enjoy

Compelling read, I like your style of writing, it always makes you anticipate the next interaction. Beth has a feisty character and I hope she teaches both men a lesson in the end. She obviously has a lot more strength than her Mum. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Sorry feedback left under wrong story! Mega laptop glitch.

a toe-headed newly turned eighteen year old vixen (towheaded)

ran so thick that it ran (6 words - two of them ran)

a feminine vice (vise)

discrete redhead (discreet)

red-heads (redheads)

quarter back (quarterback)

pie eyed (pie-eyed)

Albert's eyes shinned (shined)