All Comments on 'Mattie Pt. 01'

But too good to be believable. The only conflict occurred when Mark wanted to oust Justin. She was good at her job and at fucking almost every guy that showed up. Aside from that serious flaw, this was a pretty good story. Good characters, good dialogue, good sex. What am I complaining about.? Add some conflict in your stories and you'll be much more appreciated.

Knew a Mattie once. Met her via a blind date. She had dark hair though, instead of auburn, and was in her early twenties when I met her. Beautiful though, Plus she was a schoolteacher, not a PI, but she became a life insurance agent/financial planner. Otherwise, her behavior matched the MC. The girl should have given "kissing instruction" or wrote "how to" instruction books for young women. She was that GOOD! I'll read the next in thee series.