All Comments on 'Mattress Shop'

Very little background, very little story.

Almost like a long sentence without a verb.

No rating.

"She had wanted to stop after Teresa, but god had other plans, and she could not use birth control or get her tubes tied because of her faith."

How about a vasectomy? Condom? Or is this precluded by the husband's faith, which doesn't seem as strong as his wife's? Business trip is a disguise for a quick snip to stem the tide! I think that might make for an interesting story in this type of series--comedy of errors, where the wife suspects him of having an affair. You could bring up an interesting discussion of faith and reason in that context, and have some fun doing it as well. As a vignette, I liked it, but it ends, just as it starts to get interesting....

So far, so good.

It needs a better conclusion.