by HardMan73
The time at mall was fun. Had no idea that Leroy would still be around. Hopefully he have Merida teaching Max
I would love to see more of his Asian neighbor the one that was throwing herself at him. Id also like to see him face the clingy young newly wed and make her his slut.
please don't give too many of his woman away. at least he should keep a few that will be exclusive to him, not sharing them away.
This better not end soon at least make 10 chapters. First series that’s evenly mixed between plot and the sex scenes. Love the work tho when we gonna see sally tho or that Asian girl??
Max has what every horndog reading this wants, a magic lamp to have girls and women at our beck and call. I really like the premise, high tech, alien gadget enabling young man's desires. Better than Alladin's, which only gave 3 wishes to it's owner. So, you have lots of loose ends to still tie up, the horny Japanese slut, his friend Leroy's conquest of mother and sister, of sister Melody's interest in him, etc. Lots of potential! Waiting on future episodes with bated breath!
There are still a lot of loose end, as the 50 yo neighbor, her niece, Max's aunt, friend's sister, the holo-genie, etc. I hope all those females would in a chapter each, alone or mixed together... Great work, my friend! Keep this story alive!
But... Also, keep the characters' self-thoughts at a minimum, as they are annoying, at least for me. Very good work, though. 4.98 stars of 5 in my opinion.
This Melody encounter was hotter than the first. Looking forward to the daughter doing the splits on his cock. Threesome on the front burner for Boo and her mom.
Dear author
It's your world, feel free to make it better.
But could you just leave his family to himself exclusively?
It's a very mood-killing just to think he sharing his family member for others to bang.
I mean, there are many woman you could just pair Leroy with, especially his own family.
Please, consider it.
This started as a great series taking a fresh look at an old storyline but I’m now rather bored. There are numerous editing errors & a sameness with other stories that leaves me with a ho him feeling. Hoping it lifts in the future.