All Comments on 'May I Prove Myself To You Master Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please can we have the next issues in what happens to pet

love it cant wait to read more adventures of pet n see how she copies with her pain she requires

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent!

A really well-written and quite delightful D/s story. Thank you and please bring us chapter 2 quickly - this was amazing. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I want more

Very nice! please write more and detail all that the group does to you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BARF!

That says it all.

JudyLeeJudyLeealmost 8 years ago
A little extreme.

This woman is seriously into hard core. Needles and barbells? No way!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
huhu

Its sadistic...so, mission accomplished? I sort of disagree with both scenarios. The first, she seems to want to be shared and that's not her privilege to want, lol. The second is so close to asking for permanent damage; scar tissue at best. Maybe that she's passed his test, he has to pass her test of assuring his control to refuse her at her benefit and his whim. Of course, I guess he reserves the right, and doesn't want to crush his slave's spirit, so maybe leniency during it would save the most face...then again, it might make him soft...soft like an old graham cracker. In short, the only way to win is to say no instead of giving her false hope.

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