All Comments on 'Maybe not Everything...'

Very well written scenario. The imagery and descriptiveness of your words made it very easy to visualize and even slip inside the scene. I liked the little twist at the end. It felt as if this was very natural for you to write. You really put yourself into this little story. Excellent work. I look forward to reading more from you.

Great work for your first effort. Keep writing!

Great effort for your first story. Keep writing!

This needs a followup, more chapters. 5*

5 Star. Interesting, so different from some of your other works, definitely liked it though.

Great potential to grow. Keep going with this story. 5!

This was actually really freaking good. I didn't personally prefer the mmf fantasies (but it was right there in the tags so that's nobody's fault but mine).

I've never read Romance category stories before, but after this I might start.

I had just finished reading "Can I Touch It" and was expecting a much tamer story... but I MUCH preferred what you wrote.

Just one page but very open for other parts. Good start. Waiting for the followup.

Hot, hot, hot...

A scene in a marriage. A R-rated scene fit for a Hallmark TV Movie. No context or character development to let me know if getting pregnant is a cause for celebration or drama. Well written and more chapters would be appreciated by me.

Good narrative and hot sex scene between the couple. Hard to give it full points without more depth of their relationship and where they are in their marriage.Really should be in the Erotic Couplings genre though as their's no real romance going on. In fact, his reference to a gang bang is just the opposite. 4*

Good beginning!

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