All Comments on 'Me and Mrs. G Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow! You can't let it end with him leaving Mrs. G. Has all the makings of a real romance. Please let that evolve. Thank you. Love your works.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Gentle and comfortable ending. The young man gave the older woman the pleasure she wanted and she mounted him for the ride he will never forget.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Still a good premise.

Sex scenes still rushed.

When his cock enters her pussy there's no dialog about how it feels. Is it as good as he expected?

An editor/proofreader would help.

You wrote:

..."pealed back my foreskin with infinite care..." It's PEELED. PEALED is the ringing of a bell. You misused it in the prior chapter too.

"Stif young cock." STIFF.

Four stars.

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