by Slowandeasy47
Wow! You can't let it end with him leaving Mrs. G. Has all the makings of a real romance. Please let that evolve. Thank you. Love your works.
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Gentle and comfortable ending. The young man gave the older woman the pleasure she wanted and she mounted him for the ride he will never forget.
Still a good premise.
Sex scenes still rushed.
When his cock enters her pussy there's no dialog about how it feels. Is it as good as he expected?
An editor/proofreader would help.
You wrote:
..."pealed back my foreskin with infinite care..." It's PEELED. PEALED is the ringing of a bell. You misused it in the prior chapter too.
"Stif young cock." STIFF.
Four stars.